Tuesday, April 13, 2010
The most memorable day in my life
The most memorable day I was waiting for was camping. Camping is such a nice activity that most of my classmates love it. In my opinion. in camping I get to play many games and many enjoyable activities. Whan I was Primary 5, My form teacher, Mrs Ng, took us to the Labrador camping site. That was the place where my form teacher and my classmates including me went there.
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Your article was alright... Exzcept 'When I was Primary 5, My form teacher, ....' It should be 'When I was Primary 5, my form teacher,...' Anyway good work!
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Hey ,
ReplyDeletethat's my most loved activity as well . We are like two peas in a pod !:) Good job on the writing , But a few more lines wouldn't harm !
As Valerie said : correct your mistakes !
Anyway keep up the good work !
-Anjana :)
Where is your SUMMARY?
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